Ahhh. Evil seductress Hermione and randy Harry amuse me so. :D Very nice, Cassie. I do like H/Hr library smut! Funny you should mention SWS in your intro though. I'm not sure you know this (actually, I'm not sure anyone knows) but I'm the one that coined that fic term in an e-mail to Liss and Jori. Liss asked to use it (and who could say no to the sweet and kindly Liss) and the next thing I know it's everywhere! My brief fling with fame, as it were. :D Anyway, I did have a point in telling you that. If you want to write SWS, I think you certainly could pull it off if you wanted to. You have the smut part down well enough. Next thing you have to do is give it some heart, something to pull the reader in emotionally. It can be angst, humor, imagery, fluff, whatever your thing is. And there doesn't need to be a plot. Take AnneU's "Five Senses" or Liss' "What the Body Remembers". Not much plot to speak of but it's some brilliant smut just the same. I hope I'm not coming off as some pompous know-it-all (although I am VERY Hermione-like). :D As much as I would love to be a writer, I'm not. I'm just an avid reader that knows what she likes. Anyway, I've rambled on long enough. I will try and keep up with your work more. By the way, have you posted anywhere else besides your LJ? P.S. Aunties doing well, thanks! :)
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Funny you should mention SWS in your intro though. I'm not sure you know this (actually, I'm not sure anyone knows) but I'm the one that coined that fic term in an e-mail to Liss and Jori. Liss asked to use it (and who could say no to the sweet and kindly Liss) and the next thing I know it's everywhere! My brief fling with fame, as it were. :D Anyway, I did have a point in telling you that. If you want to write SWS, I think you certainly could pull it off if you wanted to. You have the smut part down well enough. Next thing you have to do is give it some heart, something to pull the reader in emotionally. It can be angst, humor, imagery, fluff, whatever your thing is. And there doesn't need to be a plot. Take AnneU's "Five Senses" or Liss' "What the Body Remembers". Not much plot to speak of but it's some brilliant smut just the same. I hope I'm not coming off as some pompous know-it-all (although I am VERY Hermione-like). :D As much as I would love to be a writer, I'm not. I'm just an avid reader that knows what she likes. Anyway, I've rambled on long enough. I will try and keep up with your work more. By the way, have you posted anywhere else besides your LJ?
P.S. Aunties doing well, thanks! :)